can we read these punjabi naat ash'aar?

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  1. ghulamRasool

    ghulamRasool Well-Known Member

    Salam
    This is a rendition of aj sik mitran di wadheri ai, but extra ash'aar have also been included, mainly by azam chishti. I wanted to ask that is this naat okay to read: especially in mahafil? I wouldn't have disturb and did ask an alim but they haven't replied, likely due to their busy schedule so thought to ask the question here.



    Here is the list of extra ash'ar that were added, I wrote the ones I was more cautious about in in italics:
    Note: I am not sure who wrote the first sher. May Allah forgive me if it is by a wali and I was audacious to ask about it.
    Note: some of the ash'aar I found pre-written on the internet. Some of them, I transliterated myself. Clearly, I am not a professional so if I made a mistake please do let me know.

    vichR gayaan sajnaan dian tangaan
    te mende gujde dard jagaye
    saajan gaye te muD nahi aaye
    te mendi akhiyan saawan laye
    rab jane kiun deraan payyian
    gaye saal guzar nahi aaye
    aakh fareed abaad ren o jokaan
    te rab fir vi raan wasaye

    JaiRee lazzat rovan andar
    O vich bayaan nai'een aavay
    Rona dil dee mel utaaray
    Naalay man de rog gavaavay
    Rona ishq dee shaan vidaavay
    Naalay ruthDay yaar minaavay
    A'zam rovan dhovan waala
    Kadee dozakh vich na jaavay

    ashiq da kam rona dhona
    bin rowan nai manzoori
    dil rowe bhawen akhiyaan rowan
    vich ishq de ron zaroori
    koi te ronden deed di khatir
    te koi ronden vich hazoori
    azam ishq vich roNa penda
    bhanwe vasl howe bhanwe doori

    vekhan nun sab akhiyan vale
    par o hath na aawan akhiyan
    jaiDian vich udeek mahi de
    te nai te meen barsawan akhiyan
    jad vekhan te yaar nu vekhan
    kithe jaat na pawan akhiyan
    azam vekh dukan (is ki samajh nahi lagi lekin shaid kaha "ajayhi")
    jithon o mil jawan akhiyan


    Lambi zulf mehboob mere dee
    Tay jeevain lambi raat hijr dee
    Matthay vichon laaTaan niklan
    Tay jeevain tal'at mihr sehr dee
    Nain niraalay mast raseelay
    Vich jhalak maa zaagha basar dee
    A'zam chamak dandaan day aagay
    Kee qeemat qadr gohar dee!


    Kee `ijaz nazar vich teri
    JaiRa aavay ohh vik jaavay

    Paishaani tay chamak noorani
    Vich nainaan kajal suhaavay
    khulq tere ne mo layi dunya
    te koi virla jaan bachave
    azam aida sona saaki sanu kidDe nazar na aawe

    ya Rasul Allah.
    tere hondeyan mai khane wal
    te bhala kiun jawan mastane
    teriyan akhiyan de vich saaki
    te kayi dub jande mai khane
    jaide aawan dubde jawan
    ki apne te ki begane
    azam khair is mai khane di
    te sada peende rain deewane


    shehenshaha des arab deya
    te tera vasda rave madina
    ki aakhaan kis mun nal aakhan
    te mera roshan kar de seena
    ki aukat meri kiun aakhan
    te mera kar ja paar Safina
    jibrail je hai tere (shaid "barde" kaha ya "bar de")
    aithe azam kon kameena

    koi amal na chajda mera
    te mai kiven Mehboob nun bhaawan
    na koi ilm na guN koi palle
    te mai apna aap lukawan
    vekh ke apni surat valle
    te aape hi sharmavaan
    azam vich darbar nabi de
    te keide mun nal jaavan
     

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